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Laying in bed,
Insomnia starts again.
Book in hand,
Twirling my pen.

Thoughts raging,
Steam shoots from my brain.
Eyes close shut,
I start feeling pain.

Background turns black,
Nothing in sight.
A door comes closer,
Pushing and pushing with my might.

I hear a voice,
It sounds familiar.
I turn to see,
You standing on a pillar.

Glistening eyes,
A white smile.
I want to stay,
For a long while.

You float down,
Standing with him.
Feeling sick,
My sight grows dim.

You both disappear,
Nowhere in sight.
My heart keeps bouncing,
Struggling in this fight.

Why won't it stop?
What do I do?
What happened?
Was it from you?

Your eyes,
Your smell,
Your smile,
I'm under a spell.

I drop to my knees,
I feel weak,
Cold and alone,
My eyes start to leak.

Seeing you with him,
And not with me.
Seeing you smile,
And me without glee.

Suddenly I wake,
From one simple purr.
Still alone,
And without her.

Seeing my book,
I see this poem.
Feeling trapped,
I'm in my dome.

I hear her voice,
I turn my head.
She stands beside me,
While I sit in bed.

She reads the poem,
She starts to cry.
She doesn't see,
I'm about to die.

Not from a gun,
Only from pain.
Without her,
I have nothing to gain.

She gives a hug,
And says she's sorry.
Still not seeing,
I'm not happy.

Why do this?
I'm here.
Just leave him be,
I will call you my dear.

My heart bleeds red,
Like I'm stabbed by a lance.
Seeing her smile,
Puts me in a trance.

Sitting with me,
In my shrine.
Hopefully now,
I'll call you mine
I remember when I felt like this the other day. Still kinda haunts me. So why let it gather dust? I want her to read it.
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:icongoliatgirl00:
goliatgirl00 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
this was just so wonderful!, this have happend to me twice now but still i can feel it.
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:icondemonicslayer33:
DemonicSlayer33 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry that it happened to you as well. And thanks!
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:icongoliatgirl00:
goliatgirl00 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
its okay and ur welcome!
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Zelda85044 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very Wonderfully Amazing!! :) (:XD: I just combined lots of words)

Good Job! :D
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DemonicSlayer33 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol..ThanksMeowhug 
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Zelda85044 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime! :iconlaplz:
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BlueRosePokemonFan Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I feel like this a lot. So beautiful. Really amazing job
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DemonicSlayer33 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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AntiInvaderDixie Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Beautiful. :iconcryforeverplz: Excellent work.
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DemonicSlayer33 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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